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The first rule in
writing copy that works involves your frame of mind or
perspective: take on the perspective of the person you are
writing for.
It doesn't matter
what you think about your product or service, or the thing
you're selling. What matters is the perception and mindset of
the person you target.
Writing copy that
works--kills!--is measured only one way: that they do what you
are asking people to do.
But that means you
need to understand their reasons for doing that thing,
not yours. You need to understand their perspective,
what's going on in their world, how they're feeling about
your product or your type of product.
Are you starting to
see that this has less to do with your perception and everything
to do with theirs? Okay, let's get started.
There are only a few
things I can tell you that relate to every piece of copy you
will write. And rather than try to go over the dozens and
dozens of types of copy, I will focus on the precious few.
The first rule,
obviously, is to focus on the
perspective of the person you are trying to persuade.
Now, that's very easy to say, so, how do I do that? Well, the
simple answer, the right answer, the only answer, is to
ask them. If you want to sell
ice cubes to Eskimos I suggest very highly that you talk to
Eskimos about why they would be interested in buying ice cubes,
what their opinions are about ice cubes, what their concerns
about ice cubes are, if they’ve ever bought ice cubes before,
and if so, from who and why, or, why they don't buy ice cubes at
all right now. Begin, it doesn't matter what you think about
Eskimos or ice, what matters is what Eskimos think about ice.
Call them, invite
them into your office, but talk to them. Do not, I repeat do
not, send them a questionnaire asking them for their opinions.
Talk to the people that you are attempting to persuade. Let
them tell you why they will buy.
Rule two, spend 40% percent of
your words describing the problem and convincing your reader you
understand how they're feeling right now. The biggest problem
most copywriters make is spending 90 percent of their words
describing how wonderful the product or service is, and maybe 10
percent (or zero percent) convincing the reader they understand
their problem. People buy solutions to their problems, not your
product’s wonderful features.
Can you see the
difference? The difference is huge. The person reads your
product copy very differently when they read it AFTER reading
copy that convinces them you understand their problem . It's a
little bit like going up to a member of the opposite sex on the
first date and saying “Oh by the way, will you marry me?” Well,
10 times out of 10 the answer will be no. Why? Because you
haven't given that person any context. You haven't given that
person any comfort or understanding of who you are and the
extent to which you do or don't understand “where they live”
right now.
Rule three, use simple,
emotion-packed words. Write the way you talk, not the way you
write right now. There isn't very much to be said about this
topic really. Simply do this. Read your copy out loud. The
best copy sounds like conversation. Bad copy sounds like
writing. If you want to connect with somebody emotionally, if
you're attempting to sell them, then you better write
conversationally.
Next rule, understand that
people scan copy first. Tell your story twice. Tell it first
with headlines, sub headlines, bullets, or underlines. Then
tell your story the second time in the body copy.
Another rule,
probably the best advice I have for you regarding how to write
copy that works, if you want to learn to write good copy:
write a lot of copy. When I
started writing copy I had come straight out of the IBM and a
Master's Degree program. To say the copy I wrote then was
pathetically boring is an understatement. But I wrote and I
wrote and I wrote and I wrote and I wrote and every time I wrote
my copy got better. If you don't have the time to do that, hire
a professional. Like me. But also understand that you don't
need to hire professional. The best person in the world to
write your copy is you, after you have spent time on the
telephone or in person talking to customers. The second best
person in the world to write your copy. . .is me.
Last rule, tell a story.
This is huge! People love stories; it’s in our DNA, from
the cave drawings and grunts around the camp fire to wandering
minstrels/storytellers to today’s testimonials, we love
stories. What’s a story? You have a story, the story of what
makes you better, how you came to it and why that’s important to
you. And your customers have a story, the story of how they
selected your company and how your product solves problems for
them.
If you sell fund
raising software, the ease with which your software can query
user fields and build separate mailing lists is boring. But how
your software enabled a community hospital to raise money to buy
a dialysis machine by sending donation requests to all their
renal patients (by using all that boring query stuff your
software does), well now, that’s interesting!
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